yeah.. it’s hard to comment on anything else because I cannot hear the VO. One formal thing that I noticed is that I think the piece would be stronger if you cut the very first bit of shakey/zooming in and out camera action. not needed and it is distracting from the beginning…
I cannot hear your voiceover. Only hear the music. Can you adjust the volumes in imovie?
By: amy on December 15, 2008
at 5:45 pm
yeah.. it’s hard to comment on anything else because I cannot hear the VO. One formal thing that I noticed is that I think the piece would be stronger if you cut the very first bit of shakey/zooming in and out camera action. not needed and it is distracting from the beginning…
By: amy on December 15, 2008
at 5:49 pm